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Forsaken seeds from the ashes grow up – no more than grass they would call it now.
By the time pass on, when sunlight takes care – while the rainy touch brushes the rim – goes through the ground rooting deep.
The beauty of the process, how amazing it can be!
Day by day becoming stronger. Standing the winter or peak of summer – fighting for life, to be the flower.
Goddess garden will not be ashamed, seeing its colours as no one could guess – changing the palette against your will, but listens to a heart which craves to feel.
The motion of changes and magic aura, cannot believe it happens in front of those eyes. Hypnotised still waiting – once broken wants to see – the blossom of the flower in the place no plants should be.
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Inspired by the song – Into the wild
Grabba 
Lovely:)
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I think the wording in this is exceptional. Feminine, slightly melancholy.
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Thank you. I’m grateful you liked it.
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Delicately beautiful✨
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Love this. It always great to read your poetry. I really love your current style of writting. The magic of changes from time to time. I think it is an amazing process.
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Appreciate. This way of writing allows me to convey my thoughts without restrictions and limits – in comparison to poetry rules. Agree, changes are good, necessary I would say.
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I think changes happening everyday…Either we notice it or we don’t. Right? Have a good day.
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Sure, you’re right. Have a good day as well!
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Poetry isn’t about rules, just write whatever you need to say.
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I do so. Each form has its own unique way to express things and so there is a difference I believe.
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I do it on my own way. But everyone is different. Just follow your own heart and guts. That’s my opinion.
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Breath taking as always!
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Thank you! Wonder what is happening with these comments since a couple of days, it’s intimidating like hell!
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Ate you facing some glitches?
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I’m a glitch myself, but no glitches discovered. Why?
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You said comments are intimidating you!
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Indeed, this is a truth! Didn’t used to hear comments about my talent or beauty within these poems 😛
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It’s beautiful. Love your style. I love when others also see the life on the inside and not just the pretty petals and colors. But the water spiraling up, and the sun, together creating the kaleidoscope of everything. Awesome!
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Another wonderful comment. Thank you so much!
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Spring is coming 😀
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Yeah, cannot wait 😉
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love it… love it … love it….
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The blossoming, the beauty of the process. I love this metaphor for writing things
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Me too, yet writing positive things is quite difficult ya’ know!
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Sometimes I share that opinion. I keep those darker things to myself and let fly the more positive it cryptic things so that I don’t depress the world 😋
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Someone once told me that if I will become a psychologist, suicide rate gonna get high 😛 I do the same, but it is just easier to vent my feelings through writing 😉
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Lol nice sarcasm….or truth 🤔
I mean that I write them always, I just share them much less often
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Don’t know, maybe both? Get it. To me it doesn’t really matter as long as there is the truth in it – can be even depressing 😉
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This is beautiful.
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Thank you!
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